Possible New Author....What Do You Think?

I recently had a friend send this to me, asking me for my opinion.Should they finish it? Is it worth it? Did I Like it? and my response: Seriously....you send me this.....then leave me hanging!?!?! GAAAA you better finish it!!!

So my Friend has given me permission to share this Sexy Scene Tid Bit with you, and i would like your thoughts. Do you like it? Should my friend finish it? What kind of story would you think this scene should take on? So scroll down, check out the Sexy Scene Tid Bit, and tell me what you think.

……….he sees her there, young, vibrant, and vulnerable and knows that he will take her, with or without her consent. He pins her to the door, his hands touching her, pulling her hair, kissing her deeply.

She is afraid; she knows what he wants and knows that she doesn’t have the strength to make him stop. She screams into his mouth as he roughly kisses her and forces his tongue into her. She can’t control her body, she is getting wetter by the second, yet she is trying to fight him. She knows that it is a battle she can’t win and her body is already betraying her. Ultimately he will win.

He lifts her off of the ground and throws her to the bed. He orders her to undress for him and she shakes her head no. He approaches and removes the knife from his pocket as she struggles to loose his grasp on her. He begins cutting her top off, then her bra. He yanks her pants from her and cuts the panties off of her, as the panties come free she relinquishes. He can smell her sex, he sees the wetness of it, and he is hard. He pushes her knees to her chest so that he can taste the sweet nectar issuing from her.